I pulled this short story out of my mind but I can’t get it to post here without the formatting going out the window so here’s a link to the google doc.
Commenting is on, constructive criticism is welcome. I am taking an active stance in working to improve my writing.
Its good, I like it; well written.
I did Suggest in some small tweaks and a few Commented questions.
Nice work.
Thank you for the input. I made some amendments based on your suggestions.
No problem.
Do you any other examples of your writing? I’d love to see more.
This is my first piece that I feel comfortable sharing this broadly. It is an event extracted from a character background and given detail.
Ah. Character Background itself is a good read as well.